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If I don’t say hello to you

don’t go away

because sometimes for me it’s not easy,

… it’s hard to say …

I’m like a shy flower that blooms

in early May

which goes through struggles just to open

every day,

so if you see me turning red

think of today

and just remember what I’m saying …

… just please stay …
Copyright @ TheGalleryOfEve 2013


I'm not a writer, and English is not my first language, but this little poem was inspired by `thorns, so I decided to post it!!! I hope she likes it!!! :love:



Thank you so much for all the faves and feedback, it's really appreciated! :iconleftheartdividerplz::iconrightheartdividerplz::iconsweethugplz::iconleftheartdividerplz::iconrightheartdividerplz:
And to those who feature my work, I send ALL my love!!! :iconheartballoonplz:



Please, don't forget to leave me a comment to let me know what you think of it :excited:
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:iconart-i-ficially:
Art-I-Ficially Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  New Deviant
I think about it ... :relax:
English is not your native language?
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:iconthegalleryofeve:
TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Cat nods I speak Spanish mostly ;P
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:iconpereyga:
Pereyga Featured By Owner May 5, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
<3 
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:iconthegalleryofeve:
TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
:tighthug:
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:iconhosagu:
hosagu Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Woman... :love:
I do love you :heart:
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:iconthegalleryofeve:
TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
AAwwwwwwww!!!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconflyingheartsplz::iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz::iconflyingheartsplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
I love you too Houman!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconilavplz::iconflyingheartsplz: Despite the SHYNESS!!! EveStare:icondivaplz:
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hosagu Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Ikr? this is a "coup de foudre" from the beginning
from the start Woman

Beware I come to US :la:
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:iconthegalleryofeve:
TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Totally!!! EveStare Like this --->:makeup:

:lastare: :hee: 
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:iconhosagu:
hosagu Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Hahahahah this is a wonderful emote... So yes... A yes Woman, really? :blush:
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:iconthegalleryofeve:
TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
FFFFFFFFFFFFF' Course!!! Diva Cat Diva Pose

Yes :lovestare: 
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:iconhosagu:
hosagu Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
:woohoo: 

Wedding night will be endless 

:icongrinstaresexplz:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
AAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::happycry::iconflyingheartsplz: Please forgive my super-late reply!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz: Gosh!!! :faint: You MELTED me with what you wrote me here!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconflyingheartsplz::iconflyingheartsplz::happycry::iconflyingheartsplz::iconflyingheartsplz::iconflyingheartsplz: I love you my friend, thank you SO much for all your love and sweetness towards me!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconaawplz::iconflyingheartsplz:

Gosh!!! :happycry:
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LindArtz Featured By Owner May 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This poem really speaks to me! (no pun intended :)  )  I was a painfully shy kid and teen, so I realize intimately the power of the punch behind these words....So simple...Yet so deeply complex.  Bravo! :clap:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner May 5, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Aaaaawwwww!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz: Yes, I guess those who have gone through that can understand the feeling much better :iconflyingheartsplz::huggle::iconflyingheartsplz: 
Thank you so much, my dear!!! :love:
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LindArtz Featured By Owner May 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:glomp:!!!
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:iconskyrio-the-eevee:
Skyrio-the-eevee Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014   Digital Artist
between you and all the other people and me if someone talks to me i start shaking in the knees
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:giggle: Dang, I was going to talk to you to thank you for the fave :omg:, but knowing THAT, I think it's not safe to make your knees shake ;P
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Skyrio-the-eevee Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014   Digital Artist
Ahahaha, I see what you did there. ;P
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Fiend-V Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very lovely.
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:iconthegalleryofeve:
TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
AAawww thank you so much dear Lester, I'm so glad you like it!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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DMD-CT Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Professional General Artist
This is so nice Eve! I never knew you were shy! I was very shy when i was younger...some people thought i couldn't talk at all. Now im the total opposite...im loud and i never stop talking! :giggle:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Aawwww thank you Denise!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz: I have a lot to thank DA for my "opening up" :blushes: Because I was rrrrrrrreally shy only a few years ago ... I still am, but truly, all this interaction with people of all agers across the globe has helped me more than I would have EVER anticipated!!! :omfg: ... Aaaww I would LOVE to meet you someday in one of those "dev meets" :love:
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DMD-CT Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Professional General Artist
I would love to meet you too!!!! :la: maybe someday!!
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:iconflyingheartsplz::iconlawooplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Ohhh thank you so much dear Joey!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz: That's so sweet of you to say!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconloveloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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ArtisanDwarf Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So....where did you meet me? :lol:

This lovely poem connects very much to me, but it actually makes shyness seem sweet. The whole thing feels very lovely, and extra praise should go to you for english not being your first language. :o 

Beautiful imagery! :heart: 'Struggles to open every day' is just genius :hug:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Aawwww sorry for the late reply!!! :iconaawplz:

So you're in the "shy club" too??? :ashamed: :giggle: ... Aaawwww :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz: 

Thank you so much for your kind words, my dear!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::tighthug::iconflyingheartsplz: I'm so happy to know that you like it!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconloveloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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ArtisanDwarf Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And sorry for MY late reply. :XD:

Yep I am! Oh my now if only we could hide under boxes in real life :lol: 

You're most welcome! You certainly deserve it :hug:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I know right??? :giggle:

Aaawww you're so sweet, thank you again!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Edited Sep 29, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Aaawwww how sweet of you!!!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::happycry::iconflyingheartsplz: Thank you so much, my dear, you just made my day with this comment!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconaawplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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ArtisanDwarf Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww well you're very welcome! :glomp:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Ooohhh my dear, this is such a lovely feedback, I'm so happy that you like it like that!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz: Thank you so much!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz:

PS: :happycry::iconaawplz:
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You are very welcome and this is my honest feedback :huggle: I don't praise just to make people feel better and I found this work beautifully written. :love:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Aawwwww :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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rnlaurie Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Simplistic Beauty!
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Aaawwww thank you so much!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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nakedcrayon23 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love itLove 
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Awww thank you so much, my dear!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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KiwiCocktail Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Such a cute little poem, with a lot of feelings in it! :heart:
I love the rhythm of it and the clever rhymes, I hope you write more like this sometime! :)
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:iconthegalleryofeve:
TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Awwwww thank you so much, my dear!!! :iconaawplz:
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kvdolan Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :huggle:
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Adding this poem in my collection of happy poems is a compliment... I haven't read that many happy poems in a long while honestly. And this was well worth it.

Reminded me in bits of ~lizzicess , she had the same approach. Of course, even $namenotrequired had that... idea if not the exact approach in his poems which I read (though having said that, they were worth reading - really nice poems frankly... songs... :shrug:)

Anyway, its a nice little tune... feels spanish or portuguese in its approach... Nice :)
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Ohhh my dear, thank you so much for your kind words, you cannot imagine how much I appreciate your feedback!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconaawplz::iconflyingheartsplz: It means a lot to me!!! Thank you!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
(smile) (blush) anytime... just doing my best to be a good citizen :)
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EncaitarHerenvarno Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Writer
Loved the -ay rhyming system, it gives a musical taste while we read ^^
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